Some Questions For You
I've self reflected on certain aspects of my game here and there but I'll have to ask you guys for your opinions.
1st: I'd like to ask what your thoughts on the game was or if there were any parts you personally wanted changed.
2nd: What would you want to add into the game? Like more dialogues with Ayer or something else entirely.
and 3rd: Would you prefer Torent to have abs or a soft belly? I don't really know peoples preferences that much but mine is kind of affected by local cultural standards and myths.
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Get To The Lonely A Home
To The Lonely A Home
A furry NSFW VN about finding a place to be happy
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1st: Honestly none… Not everything needs to be change.
2nd: But, added… There are many things, but one of them is on the 3rd question… So I can’t say for certain due to not knowing the direction of the path laid upon us. My thing that I like more in writing is the feeling of comfort conveyed in the readers. Cuddles mostly, that even when is read you can somewhat feel that.
3rd: For me, honestly, versatility is appreciated. In this case, I would like both to be frank. But if I had to choose… I do not know.
Your characters are perfect just as they are. I love the designs.
Torent with abs is good <3
can i love him ???
Yes and yes XD
It's been a while so I can't really remember much, but I always prefer soft bellies
Well, its atmosphere good and the characters are good. But the content is not enough for me to say meaningful opinions and addition. Abs and soft belly are both OK for me.
I think it's too early for me to answer either of the first two questions, but I can definitely tell you I like soft bellies.
The game is very good so far! Since we only are at the very beginning of the story I don't think anything needs to be changed.
As for Torent, I really like how he looks like in his current state, I think you gave him a good balancing between rock abs and soft belly, he has defined abs but with a nice hint of softness. I'd love to see content focusing on Torent's pecs once he and the MC get closer.
Sorry, I haven't played your game yet. Will play the current version and give my opinion later.
However I can answer your final question: yes, I prefer soft belly; musclegut devotion. ♡
First I wanna say I found your game recently and really liked it, so far the story seems interesting and the guys are hot, which isn't that what truly matters. Though as for the things you wanted feed back on, I have an opinion or two.
1. Honestly so far the game seems really solid not really anything I think you should change. MC is going along with Torent and Ayer, but isn't blindly trusting them, especially since the two don't seem to have any qualms with messing the MC's mind. I personally would be a bit more vocal/upset with the mind reading and mental manipulation, but MC's reactions to the whole thing seems solid.2. One thing I'd like to see is a bit more information about magic and the Scions. Like, is all that's required to be a Scion is to have an affinity for one of the primordial gods elements, if so then could any of the magic users from MC's home have been able to become a Scion or is there something specific about MC, Thur, and Yerbel that makes them Scion worthy.
3. For Torent's belly I think both could work cause, on the one hand abs make sense for a powerful god to have, on the other hand he gives off so much big soft dad energy that I could also see a soft belly working. Maybe a muscle gut, a big soft belly but if you push down you can feel the abs underneath.
Well, so far from what I've seen it's good, we need more interactions with Torent and Ayer, and I like my bulls/minotaurs muscular with abs. Maybe you could make nipple play/worship with Torent a possibility in the future? Considering Torent has such big pecs and possibly very sensitive nipples? Maybe that'd be something torent and the MC could explore together? Perhaps some lactation too if you're feeling adventurous?
To 1st:
Well, it's YOUR Game, so it would be nice to see what kind of story YOU have to tell, i.m.h.o. <3
And you should only take (kindly made) suggestions into consideration, that do not "betray" the essence of your Game - otherwise I don't think it can become its best-possible version because you will never be able to "please everyone". But you can be true to your own vision and inspiration - which will be valuable to look back on once you're older (as me ;-) ).
To 2nd:
Well, I don't know where the story will go and if this is part of what you envisioned, but I sure would love to be able to be physically intimate with the two godly "stud-muffins" somehow (one, the other or even both - Gods are just humanized archetypes, so they're bound to be quite "virile", as we can see in almost all the "Pantheons" of Gods created by Humans).
To 3rd:
Well, I think as a creator/destructor (much like the Trinity-of-Aspects of the Hindu God-Union of "Brahma-Vishnu-Shiva", who are all Aspects of the same Entity) he needs to be quite agile and perceptive to realize when which aspect is needed/important/applicable, so I think the "fitter" version does look logical in a way (since it's a "projection" of an archetype into a human form after all).
But there could be a state of him, that has a belly - when he's filled-up too quickly with semen by another god or his apprentice, that breeds him to proof his "mettle" and challenge his God-"daddy" to show off what he's learned and challenges his skills in the process, for example.
Yet, that's just a (naughty) possibility I imagined in the rough framework I perceived from the start of the Game so far. - I might be far from what you've intended, though, but that's at least what my imagination would wish for for an NSFW-Game like this.
And so far, I perceive Torent as one of the most beautiful characters, who has a calm and powerful attitude, yet also hides an evenly powerful virility underneath his loincloth, that he only shares with those who are "worthy" of his love - since it does seem that his greatest and most precious gift would have to be his "essence" (seed/-men) being a God an all...
I'm not really into Mpreg stuff, but I would imagine, some folks might like an optional route for that, too.
For me, just blasting his love-juice into his lover(s) and keeping this powerful essence sealed long enough inside of them until they've absorbed and grown more powerful, healthy - and more deeply and meaningfully connected/attached to him - sounds more than enough with such a character.
Just make sure, you don't get influenced by others too much, if it's too far from your own vision. Since I could still RP something like that on many platforms (Bonfire, Second Life, whatnot), but your story is yours to tell for a reason...
Cheers and hope my sharing of my naughty imagination - which is inspired by the start of your story so far - maybe inspires some unique path for you to implement. I'll be looking forward to be surprised what you're gonna do eventually. Just don't get stuck in too many options - that might probably paralyze your "flow" then (I know what I'm talking about there lol )...
Don't mind me I'm just trying to steel ideas... >:3
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